All Comments on 'All Good Things Must Come to an End Ch. 02'

Love to read about him getting both of these women pregnant…

Fairy tale for the delusive.

Epilogue: Empty headed June ended up the odd person out. Marsha moved in and took Mark away from her. Mark was too wrapped up in himself to care that June was crushed. Three years later, Marsha grew tired to Mark and sent him packing in the divorce. She'd gotten everything she wanted and had destroyed two people in the process, but tough shit since they were too stupid to see it coming.

Better than most of the stories on here.

Kind of juvenile and silly. Marsha lost her husband and what she really misses is getting fucked. So why risk ruining June's marriage by fucking Mark? Oh, well, that's what friends are for. So of course if it was Marsha who had died in a car wreck it would be Mark giving his wife June to Ray for two days to fuck her eyes out. Of course, what husband wouldn't lend his wife out as a fuck toy to a widowed friend? I suspect not. Just a dumb plot idea.

Last sentence is best one author wrote. Sporadic is still too often though.