All Comments on 'All I Want is You and That Ass Pt. 03'

Decent little story, but the attempt at holding the tension by stopping short and not describing the rest of the scene doesn't quite work for me. Had to take off a point for homeboy serving cold merlot, freaking nanderthal.

@anonymous Damn, people are so serious on here, but you make a point. Reworking it a bit. You're welcome. :P