All Comments on 'All in The Family Madison'

The story was good, but it definitely needs editing. Too many spelling errors, punctuation errors and broken sentences.

This is an excellent story. It was well-paced, and you introduced characters and explained their involvement without causing any confusion.

If you write a follow-up story, perhaps have Sarah and Madison share Nathan and Tim in different instances?

Again, well done.

They should have nights where mom-son and dad-daughter sleep together all night in separate rooms.

Thank you for the feedback to all, Looking for any free help to edit this story, please feel free to contact, thank you!

Too many errors. Spelling, wrong words etc.. could not read the rest

Thanks for the feedback, going through again making corrections the software missed.