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Click hereFor a few moments, nobody moved. We were all still, breathing heavily, me whinnying softly in my throat as my orgasm wound down. Dan pulled out of me then said to Matt, "Let's get a couple of glasses of water. Grab your clothes." As he walked towards the door he stopped, bent down, and kissed me. "You hang out here for a bit, I'll bring you some in a moment. Say bye to Matt."
I turned my head and with a weak laugh waved Matt goodbye. "Bye," he said, then they left. I lay there with my calves hanging off the bed, hands above my head, my body humming, post-orgasmic, feeling the cum drying on my chest and dripping out of me slowly. I heard them talking for a bit, then the sound of feet on the stairs and the front door opening and closing. There was a moment of silence, then Dan came back into the bedroom holding a glass of water.
"So, how was that for you?" he asked.
I smiled at him. "How do you think?" I replied. "You?"
He looked down at me. "Well, I just figured that if you were going to be interested in other people I might as well benefit, and to be fair that was very, very fun. I think this is something I could do again."
I swallowed. "Can I have a sip of that, please?" I asked, reaching a hand out for the glass.
"Of course," he said, handing it to me as I levered myself up on my elbow. "So, how does that sound to you? You can do this, if you do what I say." I nodded, drinking. "And of course, I get to choose who it's with, if that's okay with you. Well, not choose necessarily, but I definitely get veto rights." I nodded again. "Good. That's good. Okay then. Well, you'd better have a shower, I think," he said, smiling. "Could you pick up those condoms too? Just sort of tidy up a bit. I'll make you a cup of tea?"
- COMMENTS
Anonymous11 months agoPretty hot and realistic. I’d like her to come clean and admit she cheated. If the commit to each other and can deal with other in their bed with no cheating, sneaking or lying I guess it could work for a select few. Any that I’ve known personally it ended bad and even ones who said they were into it and both ok when in full participation. Me never could share but each his own . I know way back when in a big city night life plenty of friends hooked up with married couples on vacation partying trying that out . A few hubbies were into it but most not so much . Once the husband cried as my friend totally dominated the hot older wife and he verbally abused the husband the whole time. Another fucked a woman all night as the husband who wasn’t time it once clothes came off was begging at one point as the guy took this middle age married mom had her anal virginity taken in front on hubby by a guy younger than there kids . He said once she lossened up a bit he went fast hard and deep as she screamed things that didn’t even add puns English as her eyes rolled back as she squirted. The hubby was disgusted and watched him pull out of his wife’s ass and slid it in her mouth. She took without thinking it was just shooting up her ass . Another friend would dp a kid from the areas mom with his step father. The son was away once after this was going on about 6 months . The mom was riding her hubby on the living room floor as the friend was pounding her ass the son unexpectedly walked in seeing this . The guys came instantly and got up expecting a fight as the don charged his friend. But the well fucked naked mom jumped in between. He was destroyed but got the record they continued just more discreet not in her home . She loved fucking the younger guy and had her new hubby’s full ok
Anonymous11 months ago"This more than many other stories in this section, seems to fit the description of the section."
Maybe not. Even the author admitted that this is not the case. This tale, like too many other highly unbelievable cuck tales, should be in the fetish category.
lc69hunter11 months agoEvery relationship needs to find its center, and every relationship is different
Anonymous11 months agoI, for one, appreciated what you were doing here. She found out, through a bad way, that she could and would let herself be drawn into it. He found out, after the fact, that she had gone outside of what they both had expected and agreed to. He decided to see if he could live with that aspect of her, as long as he had control over where, when, how, and with whom it comes out.
There's some suspension of disbelief needed in order to see him coming to this point in only a week, but it's not an impossible outcome. She's not seeking to keep cheating on him. He sees where her being turned on from this can be something that includes him, and in fact something he has a major part in, so he tests the waters with a safe friend to see if it's something he can stomach. He's not simply excited for her to be having sex with someone else instead of him. He's sharing her, not giving her away.
This more than many other stories in this section, seems to fit the description of the section.
Anonymous11 months agoWell, I'll say 1* to this awful plot, but 5* to the author, for its honest comment. At least this author has the courage to not delete the negative comments, not disable the comments section or even the evaluation section: what's the point in publishing a story for its self ? If an author is not interested to the readers opinion/feedback then maybe his/her stories are not worth to read at all. So, keep going and make the next tales better.
Anonymous11 months agoWow.
Bored wuth monogamy after onky 3 years of marriage. Have fun with that shit.
Anonymous11 months agoJust another one of the hundreds totally untrealistic fem fetish cheating-cuck tales.
CopperHarlow11 months agoAuthorHey there everyone, thanks for reading and commenting. I feel I owe you all a bit of an apology; this is a properly failed experiment from my point of view and I'm sorry you have suffered through it! I have been trying to write these last two chapters without a strict plan, letting the events fall from where I felt the characters would move emotionally, but what I've ended up with is an unrecoverable situation and two people who are fundamentally dislikeable. Over a longer-form piece like this, that doesn't really work and is only going to lead to messy, nasty outcomes that I actually don't want for these characters. El was supposed to be a free spirit but with no real background or context she just looks like a total shitty narcissist, and Dan was intended to gain some level of strength and agency but I haven't created the right conditions for that so he looks (a) weak and now (b) nasty and reactive. I don't think these characters are fixable from my perspective, and I'm sorry again for dragging you down into the hole with them.
For anyone who I've triggered or upset, I'd like to apologise; for one thing, I'm still getting used to the tagging and categorisation here and maybe this was in the wrong place from the beginning. For anyone who's complimented me on my writing, whether you liked or disliked the actual stories, I appreciate that massively. Those of you who liked it, thank you, I'm glad! I'm going to try and take all of the feedback you've all given me over this series and create something better (preferably with characters who aren't quite as hateable and with more morals!), but the journey for these two ends here. I don't know how it's doable here, but if anyone has any storylines they'd like me to write feel free to reach out?
