by BreakTheBar
Hey folks!
This is my regular new-release reminder that all of my erotica is powered by PATREON. Especially AMA: The Boyfriend! Patrons get early access to new chapters of ALL my stories, and also get to participate in POLLS that direct my writing - many of the decisions of who Robbie is spending time with in this series is directed via those polls! I'd really appreciate it if you would check it out and consider supporting.
Cheers,
~Break.
Wanda is a little like Sabrina from the OF girl in that she is submissive and wants to be owned. Also they are both mild pain sluts ? I think Madison needs round 2 :)
Really enjoyed all the different perspectives about the same moment in time. Five stars for every chapter thus far
Yes! The sex scene with Wanda was so fucking hot! I really can’t wait for Heather to get her comeuppance, maybe keel hull her. Too much? Yeah probably too much but hopefully something humiliating will happen to her.
Yep, still addicting... Don't really want it to end, but please, make Heather a sub in his harem and let his harem become official.
Like others, I’m hoping this never ends, it’s pure brilliance!
Also like others, I can’t wait until Cattie puts that bitch in her place as everyone’s sub.
Keep up the fantastic work, it’s greatly appreciated.
The sex scene with Wanda was one of the hottest I've read on this site, truly. Exactly the right amount of roughness and tenderness mixed together for my taste. The bit at the end with her being "on the phone" was a bit concerning. I feel like there's only one person she could be talking to, and if she decides to divorce Brodi, even if it isn't actually Robbie's fault and it's been a long time coming, he's still going to blame himself and it might send him into a tailspin. ON THE OTHER HAND it's clear that he's much more what Wanda is looking for in a man than Brodi is so maybe it's for the best in the long term IF this story is intended to end up as an actual harem where Robbie and the girls are all together even after the trip.
That sex scene was really hot. It was nice to have such a dramatic change too. I feel long form stories like this can sometimes get bogged down in a lot of similar scenes. So to have the sex reflect the specific characters more is awesome.
Though Cassidy‘s moment in the mirror hurt. I mean I get it. I’m often filled with self-loathing, but I hate to see it in others too.
Though let’s be honest…. Heels was the winner that night xD
I guess I spoke too soon on the previous installment. The Wanda sex scene was great and delivered exactly what was asked for, good work!
If anyone has followed the story this far and still thought Cassidy is just manipulating Robbie, her POV chapter should settle it. That level of self loathing is heartbreaking to see. Her POV section is probably my favorite section of the whole story so far. Just for the sheer rawness.
I can't decide if I liked Cattie's or Wanda's sex scene better. They were both really good.