by BreakTheBar
Such a great story! A great balance between smut and plot. Thanks for another great installment, keep up the awesome work!
Some steps toward a real reconciliation. I'm enjoying how your characters evolve and are caring for each other. Thank you so much for thinking and writing this thoroughly entertaining series!
This series started out in a strange way with all the talk of the app, it's morphed into a hot pretty cool story.
I assume you are building to some big harm scene on the boat but I am starting to get bored with the setting. I am enjoying the story but it feels like this vacation has gone on for over a week.
Just so fun to read! The only thing that throws me off is when the voice changes every now and then, going from "I" or "me" to "You". It has happened enough to make me believe it is intentional, though I do find it a bit off. But nowhere near enough to detract from the fun this story has superbly delivered right from the start!
I too am fine with the setting still.
Also… honestly I kinda feel like Terra might be the more under rated person now that I think about it. She just met these two and came upon one having a real bad panic attack…and she helps and is supportive. The more I think about this the more I feel like I have undying loyalty to Terra xD