All Comments on 'Amanda Day 01'

by MischievousThoughts

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Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftabout 14 years ago
Very Good, Very HOT

Promises to be a good storyline from what I can see.

What jumps to mind is possible stalker.

Then complicated affair with the Handyman.

I know one thing If I'm right about this. She's going to be a very busy little girl.

Great job first submission and all.

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftabout 14 years ago
One thing

You guys have very good English skills.

Better than the English.

And that's saying something.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Great first story!

I enjoyed it greatly and I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.

You've also made me curious, who is the masked stranger and why does he wear a mask?

Hot sex, especially the webcam-scene.

Write more soon (I gave it five stars).

MischievousThoughtsMischievousThoughtsabout 14 years agoAuthor
Thanks

Thanks for your comments, warms a girls heart ;)

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