All Comments on 'Amateur'

Could be a whole series, if you bothered. I'd be curious to see more in this universe. A bit short, of course, but not bad.

boring

You show promise as a writer. This could develop into a pretty good series. The sex needs more detail, but it's already better written than some of what we see here.

I was mostly going for the high concept thing! If I make a sequel it will have Christine crawling back to him because the book got stolen and someone way worse than him managed to use it on Bianca.

I just always felt like these MC protagonists should get their comeuppance, and in a specifically nonsexual way, y’know?