by luckybaldrik
The story was pretty good but the urination scene at the very end of the first chapter pretty much killed a 5 star review score. It now gets a 2.
Death is a downer in stories for me BUT... you moved past it pretty antiseptically so I was able to love past it as well.
Love futa sodomy rape action in any story. Johnson being showered if futa sperm was a great finish for this chapter (it was *not* "urination"). Will be checking out the other two chapters. Hoping the futa rape action escalates and more erotic humiliation for the futas prisoners.