All Comments on 'Amazon Invasion Ch. 01'

Death is a downer in stories for me BUT... you moved past it pretty antiseptically so I was able to love past it as well.

Love futa sodomy rape action in any story. Johnson being showered if futa sperm was a great finish for this chapter (it was *not* "urination"). Will be checking out the other two chapters. Hoping the futa rape action escalates and more erotic humiliation for the futas prisoners.

The story was pretty good but the urination scene at the very end of the first chapter pretty much killed a 5 star review score. It now gets a 2.

has a lot of potential, well written

awesome XD