All Comments on 'Amber's Transformation Ch. 02'

Lovely story, cannot wait to read more of Ambers transition

Great story, just need them a little quicker lol. I can't wait to read more.

I'm going to make a prediction that even though Jack had at least one girlfriend that Amber is going to all of a sudden crave guys. Stories like this always seem to go that way. Hoping you buck the trend. Really good so far though. Keep them coming.

Loving it all so much so far , please make part 3 a reality. I’m loving how you are doing to the details the descriptions are wonderful. As others have said I’m pleased it’s not gone all wham bam sex a go go .

Good start so far

I hope that they will take it slow and let him be a lesbian because I doubt he has any inkling to be with a guy or he would have by now

This is very good. Please continue.

I guess I missed the part where Jack/Amber got the original damaged clothing replaced.

But it was a fun adventure for Jack/Amber. A bit presumptive of the two girls to just take the poor guy shopping for girl stuff without asking any questions or offering to help. Punching holes in someone without asking if it is desirable is really not cool. I know it is a work of fiction, but as it has run so far, it should continue as more realistic.

It is rather a fun read so far.

Will it continue ?

The third chapter is submitted for approval! Thank you all for reading!

Very nice buildup going here. While the nonconsensual aspect of the spa stuff is a little cringey, all accounted it's a very well written piece with a decent base of plausibility and would be a fantasy come true for thousands of closeted gurls.

The story started off well, but quickly joined a million others. After having been caught by his boss, the last thing he would do is sit and take the "number 3" . The writer did a great job at laying out how paranoid he was about being outed, then in this part he just lets them do all this stuff to him without a whimper. It would have made a hell of a lot more sense for him to back off, like he did in college and make his boss drag it out of him.

This story went off the rails, I'm done! A guy doesn't change how he acts, his emotions overnight. Especially with a boss and immediate supervisor.

I guess I'm a simpleton (reading all the comments). I like the way the story is going. I'm not looking for completely realistic, true to life. There is plenty of bad news in the world. Keep going. It's great.

I enjoy when women help a crossdresser to be a better presentable woman! I enjoyed the help Jack was given to become Amber! Now where are Heather and Christine needing them! A well written story