All Comments on 'Ambiramus Ch. 09'

Wow, this is one of the hottest chapters I have read. I love the dynamic with Alexa, they are super hot together.

Great stuff I can't wait for the next.

I love it. Thank you for keeping the friends in the story. It makes Cindy better that she can share with everyone being so broken.

Great story, keep it going. Can't wait for Megan and Caroline

What a surprise - Mark was the bottom this chapter and he didn't even get a blow job. Considering the previous chapters I really didn't expect this.

Wow they actually allowed him to have one whole ejaculation.

Yeah Mark can keep saying he's not a submissive when Cindy seems to be controlling EVERY single aspect of their sex life

I agree with LM20ZN there is a lot of delusion here. Mark is a happy bottom, he is submissive and he loves being shared around and gangbanged.

Mark is an idiot and he’s written as one. His character just submits time and time again, it’s becoming silly.

Again another 1/5, where to next, l wonder?

TL:DR - decent read, don’t be contradictory in notes, avoid repetitive dialogue.

Good story, but the author’s notes in italics as well as Mark’s thought processes contradict what is actually happening: he IS being submissive, and others ARE being dominant. Not a bad thing, but potential readers could be put off if they are looking for male-topping-trans type stories. The story itself is decent (albeit repetitive — we know they love each other, but the fact that they reiterate it every 5-10 minutes mid sex scene gets repetitive the further the reader gets into the chapters).

This is so great.