All Comments on 'Amelia'

Nice misdirection. Also, nice work bringing a satisfying story arc to completion right on the nose at 750.

Lovely. Great tale in the limit. Thank you.

A ludicrously luscious scene. A perfect 750 — in length, yes, but so much more what you squeezed into the confines and closed perfectly. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Outstanding!

Good job. A pretty piece of work.

Loved the gentle touch.

So Maria damaged Amelia's car and that's what Maria wanted to talk about (sorry for asking)?

Nice twist :)

Yep, you got me... very nice.

Really WOW!

Fan freaking tastic!! We both wish we could give this more than 5*

Jeff & Deb

Alfa? As in the Italian car? LOL Well written, even though, in truth, same sex stuff (MM or FF) isn’t my thing. I’m always divided about writing in the first person, but just ‘cause I’m uncomfortable with it does’nt mean a damn thing!

Best,

Great twist. Smart to do a scene, not try to do a short story.

Hooked

😂😂😂

The Alpha has two dents, if I follow that to the point ….. grin …. But im not native english so its guessing ….. but a dent is nothing compared to health or life threatening or death issues …. So you girls enjoy the here and now and the future YES perfect solution

💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝✨🌸☘️

Great story. You packed alot of story in 750 words

5stars

This was absolutely wonderful, thanks!!!

This absolutely worked. Thanks

An Alfa gets dents. Fun story anyway.