All Comments on 'Amelia & Andrew: The Diamond Legacy Ch. 08'

These characters are awesome. I can't wait until they get their hands on whose really behind this. It's hard to believe that Andrew and Amelia are newbies and not ancient. Either way they both kick ass. Is it too soon to beg for chapter 9? 5 stars of course, but you deserve 500.*****

Awesome as always. Whoever killed Shannon and kidnapped his son may have the upper hand right not but it will suck to be them once Andrew finds them. Andrew and Amelia don't even know what their full abilities are so I wouldn't want to be on their shit list.

I totally agree with everything that Iread2relax said their comment five stars are simply not enough!

I'm loving this story can't wait to read more!!! Couldn't put my phone down until i read all of them

Your back yay love it

Intense!

I LOVE AMELIA & ANDREW CHARACTERS VERY MUCH AND I AGREE WITH ARIESGIRL WHOLE-HEARTLY. I WOULDN'T WANT TO BE THE BAD GUYS WHEN THEY CATCH UP WITH THEM. I'M TOTALLY LOVING THIS STORY A HELLUVA LOT. KEEP UP THE WRITING. IMPATIENTLY WAITING ON THE NEXT KICK-ASS CHAPTER.

GOOD LUCK.

If I had to guess, I'd say that you're doing it either to save time, or because you cannot find an editor.

Please, please, please, PLEASE.

GET AN EDITOR.

I can guarantee that far more people will be not only willing, but ANXIOUS to read the next chapters if the errors are caught.

People are much less likely to catch their own mistakes while writing, as the brain subconsciously knows what SHOULD be there, and simply skips over the errors.

When I get a chance, which should likely be over the course of the next couple weeks, I'm going to edit your self-edited chapters, then send them to you via your contact tab.

I'll put my skills where my mouth is, just to show you how much an editor can polish things simply by looking at a chapter with a fresh set of eyes.

Okay, so I wanted to edit your stuff for you.

Heh. *facepalm*

In the month since then, I've gotten a grand total of the first 3 chapters of this series done.

=/

That's pathetic, considering how fast I read.

It really sucks that I actually managed to do that little. Here's hoping I can finish the rest of the chapters you said you didn't have an editor for, maybe sometime before the next ice age hits...