by SylviaG
...wtf? Is there a point to this story? I'm starting to get pissed that I've wasted this much time on it, but I guess I have no one to blame for that but myself. Still, you're plotting kind of sucks.
You haven't really given us any answers yet! How can u end it there? The pills, what are they for? The big boobs in the picture? Come on!?!?!??! The video answers nothing, really!!!! The feeling that there is something amiss with all the whispers throughout the whole story, the cops can't be that stupid to ignore the photo...if you end it there, then you are a poor lazy writer!!!!
it seems like you are copying leonardo from shatter island into the heroine if it is then the story really sucks as all tge guys except andy were unattractive or small dicks no good desciption of sex vaguely covered the its and bits almost skipping tge connecting dots with bipolar characters like the girl and her husband if she is what he says then i have wasted my time on the trashy story of yours