by Krieger013
So, I remembered commenting on the first chapter that I would like to see more of and explore this world. Since I didn't have anything to read at the moment I continued reading this story. What I was interested in was the world with wildly different cultures clashing and maybe even the gods getting involved somehow. In the first chapter the never-ending angst about being sinful and the erotic things were at least mixed with some pretty good world and character building, two things that in chapters 2 and 3 became irrelevant other than being a backdrop to the sex. How are the gods even relevant? I thought the intro to chapter 3 might be foreshadowing something cool but the rest of the chapter was basically "... and they fucked some more."
It was a very nice story. Youngsters being taught and learning. If it had only happened to me