by d1rty0ldMan74
Another excellent installment. I think that the best part was Dean's change of heart. 5/5
Thank you for the intro comments. I love this story and feared it would soon come to an end. I have waiting for this next story but hoped you don’t rush.
5 little yellow 5 pointed thingies. Excellent story. Appreciated your comments in the intro about continuing the story. Keep up the good work.
OG
I'm at the point where I go back and rate all in the series 1 star. Why? Because I despise reading unfinished stories. I can't understand the reason for publishing an unfinished story. Many authors publish complete stories on this site, why can't all?
I mean seriously, if you don't want to read a serialized story then don't. No need to be a dick and review bomb someone.