All Comments on 'Amy - Day 04-05'

by the Godess just love the way your telling us this story

Can't get enough of this story. Eager for more please. So well written and so damn seksy.

Excellent!! The twin thing is real and you are doing a good job with it. Keep up the good work.

Ok, this needs to be rushed! Holy crap I just binged this entire series in 2 hours without stopping!

Besides some spelling errors, the story is awesome so far. Much more mature than I expected as well. 5*

Another great chapter!!! 5 Stars!

Keep 'em coming!!

Great story so far, and thanks for keeping the nerdy shit to a minimum.

BUT….

When quoting lyrics from a song, you need to cite the actual creative artist(s) who WROTE those lyrics, not just one of MANY singers who recorded it. “Can’t Help Falling in Love” was written by Hugo Peretti, Luigi Creatore, and George David Weiss.

And “Amy” was written by band member Craig Lee Fuller, not the entire Pure Prairie League.

This would be a 5* story if it weren't for the damn lesbian daughter and her "partner". What a load of CRAP! And now the "partner" is pregnant?! The baby isn't part of the family since Sophie isn't the birthing mother. No blood relation at all! Cut out all the woke LGBTQ garbage and rewrite the damn story the way it should be. I love what's going on between David and Amy and the other straight members of the family. Nothing to change there. As is, 3*. Won't be rating it anymore as I won't be reading this crap anymore.

Just read the whole series overnight. Great story telling I can’t wait for the further adventures!

You have a gift Sir. Thank you for sharing and giving THIS OldMan a bad case of the feels.

Does anyone else love how the homophobe is so opinionated but hides behind anonymous? My real life daughter is engaged to a girl. We love them both. You don't like it, don't read it.

The best thing about the anonymous idiot is that they are complaining about a lesbian relationship while reading an invest story. Not sure they get how idiotic they come across. But hey, no worries because they are going to stop reading…at least until the next chapter

Damnit….. incest story….not invest story

DOM,

You are sooooooo right regarding the troll hiding behind "Anonymous". Your reaction to it; spot on and very appropriate.

Story:

Once again, great story! I very much like how the family is coming together. The way you depict David coming out of his shell with all of the girls joyously recognizing the signs. The success conveying each of their emotions was infectious.

I don't know what it is about your writing, but I feel like I am in the room; a fly on the wall. I mentioned in my comments on other "days", I am invested in story, a love story, more than their love scenes. That's not say those scenes are lack, far from it. So, once again, thank you for such a great story, which I hope continues, and for your writing talent.

My best to you and yours,

sd31r20

Another good installment. 5/5

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I can't leave it alone when the subject of negative comments from anonymous users are brought up. I have stopped reading part of the way through MANY stories on this site and immediately skipped to the last page to write a scathing, negative comment. But I ALWAYS post it under my pseudonym and NEVER anonymously.

Conversely, I have praised stories such as this one as well and again I never considered using the anonymous option.

This has earned me the nuisance of a couple of trolls who have me in their following list so that every time that I post something new from my own imagination, they appear within the first twenty-four hours and drop negative comments ANONYMOUSLY in retaliation. It's hilarious to me that they hide behind the anonymous tag in a useless effort for revenge. 🤣 😅

Why "useless" you ask? If you are familiar with the software, all authors are empowered to moderate the comments left on their stories. I simply keep a close watch for notifications that an anonymous user has posted a comment on my story. If it is respectful with a valid criticism, I'll let it go. But derogatory comments posted anonymously are deleted in less than 4 hours with extreme prejudice.

Negative comments posted under your user name are generally not deleted unless they were disrespectful by a high degree. As an author on this site, I welcome valid criticism, but I have zero tolerance for abuse.

3/5 would be higher if you cared enough to watch out for homophones and similar errors. In general I like your story and have binged on it all day. I just find such errors jarring and they degrade the pleasure of an otherwise good read.

I like the story but it also devolves into a collection of daily events by the characters. Thanks for sharing this work.