by Poutylips21
A hot fantasy. I just can’t imagining it ever happening like this, but boy, do I wish it could!!
Good, especially good since it looks like your first story. Well done. It reminds me of a lover who took my load in her mouth one time...and I damn near died! Orgasms are so fucking nice...and having had my first one when I think I was about 13 or 14...which is right at 70 years ago. I've been married twice...both wives (one an ex and the other while we were married) passed and I've had lots of sex with several women. Current lover likes me to rub her to get her off, and my blue pill fueled cock works best to just stroke off to some powerful orgasms. For most of my life my orgasms were a fairly short peak of intense pleasure, coming down quickly. Now for the last few years I think my orgasms are more like a womans...a more gradual rise...and a much more prolonged period of intense pleaseure. My lover has at times said she almost worries about me because I am so consumed by the orgasm.
Keep writing. I need to learn how to put some of my things on here. I've written a lot about women I've been with over the years. In one case a girl who about 20 and I was 37 the first time we had sex. Last time was over 20 years later! We were not steady lovers all that time, she tried to be a good wife...but I saw her one day and her expression said..."call me" and I did. And I was between her legs on her living room floor in about 15 minutes. OK, enough. Thanks again for your story. 5*
Not gonna tell you any of my past escapades. This is all about your story. And young lady, you nailed it. Minor spelling, but not any routing away from the objective. Mounting suspense to the made me want to scan the apps for a ringer like you. If you are so inclined, the user name has me dreaming🔥🔥🔥🔥
Great story--made me want the same experience--being in my 60's you really nailed my fantasy also
Please keep writing --- Thanks!!
Very good story idea that turned me on a lot. I gave 4 stars due to editing issues. I believe with a proofreader and editor you will be turning out 5 star stories in no time!
I thought it was excellent and then I saw the 'copied' comment so I went looking and found the story published 11 years ago that you have virtually 'stolen' the premise and word for word dialogue from. And even with that you still made 5+ spelling errors, managed to use the same word twice in one paragraph and other blunders. Well done to the original author of https://www.literotica.com/s/facial-hook-up