All Comments on 'Amy - Working Hard and Playing Hard'

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ScottishTexanScottishTexan7 months ago

Another excellent installment! 5/5

tjb50caltjb50cal7 months ago

great update, keep it going

HelgamiteHelgamite7 months ago

Loving the interactions between Dave and his kids plus Chris. True father for them all and you can read the love between them. True talent in writing for that. Keep up the great work dude!!

Rapierwit24601Rapierwit246017 months ago

Pace seemed bogged down with mundane minutiae. I’m assuming the Gettysburg trip will eventually become an essential plot point- or what’s the purpose?

Still enjoyable, though.

unclemerv77unclemerv777 months ago

very good, I can't wait for the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

★★★★★ out of 5 another great installment... hopefully there will be many more to come.

It's not just the sex scenes, the story and the characters are compelling. Keep it up.

1stltdan1stltdan4 months ago

Fantastic story hopefully many more chapters will follow. I started read this and could stop till I read this chapter and wished that there was more. Thank you

goinghighgoinghighabout 2 months ago

I just reading the whole series {.so far} and really enjoyed it. As usual, because there are a lot of really good writers here. I also like the longer stories whether long chapters or lots of chapters.

Thank you and please continue.

Gene Hill

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Been writing games and stories for decades for public and private consumption. New to erotica. I am a superstitious writer. I believe I write better if I handwrite the piece first then transcribe it so I may take a little between stories. I really appreciate all the feedbac...

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