by d1rty0ldMan74
Loving the interactions between Dave and his kids plus Chris. True father for them all and you can read the love between them. True talent in writing for that. Keep up the great work dude!!
Pace seemed bogged down with mundane minutiae. I’m assuming the Gettysburg trip will eventually become an essential plot point- or what’s the purpose?
Still enjoyable, though.
★★★★★ out of 5 another great installment... hopefully there will be many more to come.
It's not just the sex scenes, the story and the characters are compelling. Keep it up.
Fantastic story hopefully many more chapters will follow. I started read this and could stop till I read this chapter and wished that there was more. Thank you
I just reading the whole series {.so far} and really enjoyed it. As usual, because there are a lot of really good writers here. I also like the longer stories whether long chapters or lots of chapters.
Thank you and please continue.
Gene Hill