All Comments on 'Amy's Vacation Ch. 11'

So glad you're back... was worried when there were no postings for so long. Please keep going. This is a little teaser though... setting up lots more adventures, but too short.

Yep... this chapter is a total setup... but, still hope you enjoyed it! :0)

fantastic writing, you effortlessly make the reader feel a part of the story,I look forward to the continuation.

Great to have you back after a dry time. I have searched for similar stories, nothing matches this tale. Please tell us more!

Excellent writing -- we need to see more!

Thank you, Amy, for a fun day of reading. As I said in another comment, your writing is fluid. I also like the nuggets of imagery that you toss in, you are very perceptive with those. I like your scene descriptions, too. You give a good clear description, but don't overdo it, knowing the readers will fill in some of the details. Lastly, I enjoyed Amy's internal thoughts. I know her better now. Well done!

Fantastic series, loved it.