All Comments on 'An Agreement Gone Wrong Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Wow…loved it, the first instalment was my favourite on this site, I’d given up hoping for a second. And now it is here, and it was perfect….hanging out for the next one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Fucking amazing continuation of my fav story of yours. I'm in love with Christie - the muscles, the strength, the casual dominance, and maybe one other small thing... ;) Can't wait for the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I think thus us the first type ive seen this kind of protagonist have any regrets, and i hope they csn be happy together after this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago
We need more

We need more!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Please let John take it in the back from the futa

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This chapter was great!!! It giver a lot of insight into her thinking and shows that what we saw of her in the first chapter is not who she wants to be, but what she seems like due to not knowing how to act. Looking forward to the next chapter!!!

nanoxxxnanoxxxover 2 years ago

This chapter was good and it nicely gave us an insight into Christine. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

sir_skynet842sir_skynet842over 2 years ago

Great chapter! I look forward to the following. I hope this time does not have to wait too long...

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Hope Christie and John work it out, they actually love each other unlike the other cheating stories people make

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I kind of hope they become essentially partners in crime. It'd be sad if he just became another broken toy of hers that she dominates and is then just done with. It feels like you've been building to him being different from everyone else so I'm excited to see where this goes

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

It brings me a strange feeling. You know when it comes to the couples I prefer to see the happy end. Still, the last phrase hints at a sequel. I'll be happy to read how it all ends. I'll be looking forward to it.

22220832222083over 2 years ago

You know the end makes me feel almost sad. Like the pages before it are way more than erotic, they’re amazing. But those last 2-3 paragraphs really make me hope that somehow, someway, this couple will end up okay. Amazing story man, hope to read a part 3

Janrene3Janrene3about 2 years ago

She is still a crazed psycho!

She’s sad, she states. But not so sad, that she tries to see things from his point of view.

A sad and disturbed story with just too much focus on the sex, when some character building would have been nicer imho.

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