All Comments on 'An Edging Affair'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Interesting premise

But it ends before it really begins.

Has real potential.

Imagine her catching him watching her and then edging him herself. That's what I imagine, anyhow.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Standard run of the mill voyeur story, nothing new but an okay read. Sort of amused to see the story start with mention of a two piece bikini, when by definition a bikini is a small two piece costume.

aloasstraloasstrabout 3 years ago
What happened??

This could become something. Why not go out in the garden to tan yourself together with here??

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Potentially good tale spoiled by being limited to describing what happens before the pre-foreplay introductions.

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