by joeyb878
But it ends before it really begins.
Has real potential.
Imagine her catching him watching her and then edging him herself. That's what I imagine, anyhow.
Standard run of the mill voyeur story, nothing new but an okay read. Sort of amused to see the story start with mention of a two piece bikini, when by definition a bikini is a small two piece costume.
This could become something. Why not go out in the garden to tan yourself together with here??
Potentially good tale spoiled by being limited to describing what happens before the pre-foreplay introductions.