by CaptainQuo
Outstanding - keep writing! A kinky & caring dominant and her adoring & obedient submissive. This is really HOT! Nice work!
That is so romantic, wonderful vibes while reading... Thank you for sharing this! Write on, it is so well done!
Please don't use this "you" thing. I know it's very trendy in fan fiction, but I have no desire to have anything sexual to do with another woman and I don't have a penis. Being told I'm doing these things is an instant turn-off. It also guarantees we can't know anything about the other person's thoughts or feelings or even anything they do when out of sight of the MC.