All Comments on 'An Evening in Sydney'

Are you kidding . You start a story and stop it cold.

If she finished it, she can't go home.. its an honor thing and she doesn't want her husband to stone her.

This is a lovely first submission. Please don't stop.

Is trying to tell you that short submissions like this don't do well. You've submitted just under 1800 words (not the worst BTW). An average lit page is around 37-3800 words so you've come up with 1/2 a page. You should aim for at least 2-3 pages if the story supports that.

With all the stories posted here daily why would anyone follow such a short beginning much less vote to rate it. N/R

For me, this ended in the right place...I hope this is the whole story...1*

I will wait to see where this goes before I pass judgment, however I do have one issue. Please do not just give characters on letter names. Especially "A" or "I" as those can be words in themselves. You can make up any name, but please use one. It makes it so much easier to read. I suggest in your next chapter you give then names instead of initials.

the married woman telling her story: W (whore). the lover LB (little bull), the husband C (cuckold) and the other woman B (bitch). The story? just a turd!

Let's see what this woman decides to do.

Author must have been as bored with his story as I was.