All Comments on 'An Innocent in Paris Pt. 03'

First read; amazing. This chapter continues seamlessly from the first two. The quality of the writing is first class. I'm sure there's much more to come as the potential is terrific. Very good stuff.

Thanks bcc1871. Really appreciate your comments. Yes, some interesting situations may develop in the next part.

Under the surface Monaco can be full of hard to resist temptations of all types...

Monaco is certainly an interesting place for both the girls especially Marie. What about Paris where Danielle awaits?

Joannexx, Would it be OK if I suggested some skills that Marie could pick up along the way? There are so many things she has yet to experience as part of her exploration and corruption. You will have no doubt thought of them and others already so please ignore if so.

More to come very soon. Marie is trying to catch up with Uni work. A lot has happened…. :-)

Looking forward to it.

We must ensure you are put forward for the 2021 awards. Your writing is the best.

Hi Anonymous- thank you so much x

The next chapter should be published in a few days. She’s learning new things, but where is this leading?….