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The_allegory_manThe_allegory_manabout 2 years ago

Good story. I can sense a surprise coming!

A bit repetitious, ie: she, she, she and my cock, my cock, my cock.

A line editor would help.

nectarines_are_peachynectarines_are_peachyabout 2 years agoAuthor

Thanks very much for the feedback!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This chapter is not a stand-alone story. To be properly appreciated and understood, the reader should begin with Chapter 1. That said, compelling drama continues in this chapter. The characters are well-conceived, and the plot unfolds in a careful manner that is neither too brief or too long. This is truly wonderful story-telling.

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I am taking the first tentative steps into erotic literature. I'm excited to write these stories. Very open to feedback. Please feel free to contact me at nectarinesarepeachy@gmail.com

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