All Comments on 'An Obedient Boy for Katherine Pt. 13'

Great Fantasy story. But was a little let down when Marcus and Bess really didn't have sex with his mother and her sister, miss Opportunity !!

I like the slow pace, actually.

Don't rush, I like that you take your time with each scene.

You make a good job giving the reader sneak peeks of what might come further down the line, then distracting us by similarly engaging other situations.

You will get there, eventually.

And then, hopefully, more.