All Comments on 'An Obsession with Jane Pt. 03'
by awriterssojourn
- 16 Comments
mhmichelabout 1 month agoGood job introducing Colten to Mason, very creative. Mason will think he initiated the tease. The dialog with Jane is hot, she's a born tease, knows how to do it and controls her men with words. I like the idea of Colten's looks being nothing special, not ugly but not a stud, however his cock is slightly bigger than Masons, enough to notice, a little longer and obviously a bit thicker. Don't let Colten become an arrogant Dom, let Jane take control. What's up with the dating app, does Joan have an account just for fun. What is John the neighbor going to do.....oh my, please continue.
Anonymousabout 1 month agoColton is getting bolder as he's playing with fire baby boy might get wrecked someday but not today as the old man john's getting is turn soon enough with the luscious Jane. While Colton has uncommonly had more ammunition for Jane and their new times together.
Continue on
Cheers!
Anonymous28 days agoExcellent reading, but one question is interesting, from the legal side. What would the guy face for this double penetration (on private property and on someone else’s wife) if she went to the police? Sperm on the body as proof.
mitchawa24 days agoThe plot thickens with Colton's boldness, and his blackmail is working. The blow job was well-described and his tiny penetration was a real attempt. His ejaculation almost messed up his plan, but Jane r recovered and gave Mason what he wanted and escaped being caught. However, Mason is playing with fire and may end up regretting spurring on his wife, and opening the door/[pussy for Colton.
Anonymous24 days agoGreat. Please continue this series. Mason needs to set up more contact with John and Jane. Let him set up more teasing for Colton. Their two paths could even merge. DWH
WifeWatchman7 days agoLove reading about Jane and Colton. I hope we’ll read about Colton’s potent sperm deep inside Jane, seeking her waiting eggs. If it were me, I’d drop the old man from the story and concentrate on Mason bringing his wife and Colton together. Keep up the great work!
Bri294 days agoGreat writing! Jane is playing a dangerous game shes manipulating her husbands fantasy to have a session with Colton, and the fact she is deceiving Mason at the same time to get what she really wants is tantamount to cheating.Throw into the mix that Colton is obsessed with Jane means that this can only end badly for everyone involved.Obviously in the real world Colton would be someones bitch in a prison cell doing time for rape but then Awriterssojourn would have nothing to write about.These sort of tales intrigue me because i like to see how the writer it wraps it all up thats where creativity comes in there's been similar stories that have dragged on and on and the author has wrote themselves into a corner ,i mean Jane and Mason have a kid and are a family how can it end well?
Well done
mitchawa1 day agoAn exotic blackmail story. The plot is followed in a detailed fashion allowing us readers to be in the minds of all three characters. The tension builds until the blowjob, but neither of the participants are satisfied. Meanwhile, Mason is egging his wife on. He wants her to reveal her near nudity to the older male next door, and also to the twenty-year-old, of whom Mason is not completely aware. Colton is becoming more aggressive and Jane on the surface is not enjoying the game but subconsciously she enjoys Colton's motives. As usual, the writing is superb and it's both easy and fun to read.
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