by MarkLivingston
Yes, Nice is a perfect adjective!!! As an old guy I appreciate the emotion which was well detailed. And both Amber and Ann were great characters!! Good work MarkLivingston!!
It was a pleasant story, but kind of fell off and was disappointing at the end.
300WSM and StrappySandals: Thank you both for the compliments! There'll be a sequel or two.
Wishing4more: I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for the compliment about the writing!
@Anonymous after Wishing: I'm sorry for you loss, but glad the story was meaningful for you. I think you'll like the next chapter too.
Wonderful story, and very erotic. The Amber/Ann scene had this old man erect and wanting. Five stars!
Crusader235: Thanks for your feedback, appreciate it! There's a sequel that I'll probably post up tonight. It has Mark interacting with Amber as Amber, and I think parts of it turned out very nice.
Thank you so much for coming over to read it! I thought a big parallel with your story was the 'gentlemanliness' of the MCs. Take care.