All Comments on 'An Old Boy Scout Meets an Angel'

by MarkLivingston

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StrappySandalsStrappySandals11 months ago

Yes, Nice is a perfect adjective!!! As an old guy I appreciate the emotion which was well detailed. And both Amber and Ann were great characters!! Good work MarkLivingston!!

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

It was a pleasant story, but kind of fell off and was disappointing at the end.

MarkLivingstonMarkLivingston11 months agoAuthor

300WSM and StrappySandals: Thank you both for the compliments! There'll be a sequel or two.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Loved it

Wishing4moreWishing4more11 months ago

Very well written. Loved it!

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

I lost my wife 3 years ago, and this is a story I wish was mine

MarkLivingstonMarkLivingston11 months agoAuthor

Wishing4more: I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for the compliment about the writing!

@Anonymous after Wishing: I'm sorry for you loss, but glad the story was meaningful for you. I think you'll like the next chapter too.

Crusader235Crusader23511 months ago

Wonderful story, and very erotic. The Amber/Ann scene had this old man erect and wanting. Five stars!

MarkLivingstonMarkLivingston11 months agoAuthor

Crusader235: Thanks for your feedback, appreciate it! There's a sequel that I'll probably post up tonight. It has Mark interacting with Amber as Amber, and I think parts of it turned out very nice.

Djmac1031Djmac10319 months ago

Very sweet, very sexy. Well done

MarkLivingstonMarkLivingston9 months agoAuthor

Thank you so much for coming over to read it! I thought a big parallel with your story was the 'gentlemanliness' of the MCs. Take care.

KarenCDFLKarenCDFL3 months ago

What a lovely story! 5 Stars!

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