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DevonCowboyDevonCowboyover 1 year ago

Good one. Try writing in the first person rather than the third person. It makes the scenario seem to be unfolding in front of the readers eyes and very much in the present. The third person tends to feel in the past. Even so, a very sexy story

bullworshipperbullworshipperover 1 year ago

Happy New Year to you, dear fag! Nice, sexy story: I'd cum for Sam.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Morer please . I wAS borne in Newcastle

dnsontndnsontnover 1 year ago

A very Happy New Year to you, FagWithAKeyboard! That was incredibly hot!

sealandssdsealandssdover 1 year ago

why Newcastle? Did I miss some info?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Dude, come on, where's the Part 2? I need my beefy rugby Brits fix.

bobbisworldbobbisworld6 months ago

I love MMb threesomes, what a way to bring in the new year, please continue.

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I’m a 25 year-old lad who enjoys creative writing of all kinds. This is my outlet for writing horny stories of men fucking, and I very much hope you enjoy them!

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