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Anonymous5 months agoBarry might as well just go after his mom and Lucy now as you have turned Jo from and ex-nun into a nymphomaniac and whore within a few days. Nothing but a street whore now selling sex for money., which id really sad because I like the rest of the story. Beside the fact that such a dramatic transformation in such a short time and from a nun to whore is totally unbelievable and unrealistic. Might as well just put her on a street corner now.
Anonymous16 days agoI hope things work out with an editor.
The names of Jo and Mum being improperly used was rather confusing for a few paragraphs.
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