by simmaster
I want to be her slave now. I wish he would have been made to only have cum for breakfast and get multiple loads then.
Maybe we can have this story a little less one dimensional now the chapters are slightly longer ? Same thing time after time with this super OP orc dominating this guy, maybe give her a little personality apart from the evil side which is all we have seen so far.
Maybe instead of just constant rape this rape-hate relationship becomes a dependency thing? Maybe even a very small sliver of romance down the future, but I suggest expanding more on Bologal~ She is our main character along with Tommy Fuckboy.