All Comments on 'An Unusual Beginning Ch. 04'

Such a lovely story, classic romance. David and Arlene need to cut there loses with these so-called friends. Have you consider Amazon Kindle Vella?

Thank you

Bain

What William said about the adopted children is not true. William sounds like an idiot, and nobody should let him read procreate. William mic penis and shayhoe can kick rocks.

I love this story and your other stories, please continue writing!

I don't mean to be picky, but you desperately need someone to read your stories and help pick up the numerous mistakes in grammar, spelling and punctuation. It becomes distracting and steals from the story.

Great story! Please don't turn it into trash along the way, as so many others have done.

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