All Comments on 'An Unusual Ending to a Holiday'

An un·gu·late (noun) is a hoofed mammal. To un·du·late (verb) is to move or go with a smooth up-and-down motion.

I would certainly enjoy much of the casual sex you describe. Would be great to have a male friend who enjoys sex and genuine friendship without dependency and neediness and as a fun companion. I like that both you and Jim are equally adept as top and bottom. Sweet!

You need to look up the definition of ungulate. An ungulate is a hoofed quadruped mammal, such as a cow or deer.

I believe you mean undulate when you describe sexual intercourse. I have noticed this malaprop in other of your stories.

Sorry about the spelling, you trust the computer not your memory.

Yes you are right the story line is a bit dry, but seemed ok as I was writing. The basis of this story was based on two peoples real live events, that I merged for more reader interest.

Dry but enjoyable and I look forward to more of your stories.

Autospell is ridiculous! Just now as I wrote autospell, it wrote "autosomal."

When I wrote malaprop previously, it printed "jalapeno."

Apparently the price of accuracy with this "help" is eternal vigilance...

But please press on and keep writing, my friend!

Worst writing I have ever seen.

I see the troll is back, must really like my work. Who knows maybe one day they will write something.