by ozzietwo
But the use of "W" and "M" is so hard to follow. Why not use names people can relate to?
This interminable, tedious, and redundant description of what they do and how much they like it, while waiting for you to get to the point, was more than I could bear, particularly since the point wasn't much of anything. I was anticipating something like their being displayed on a giant screen on the side of the building. Does it really take two pages to say, "While enjoying sex, we saw another couple doing the same?"