All Comments on 'Angela Briscoe Ch. 03'

by Egmont Grigor

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T43HUNTER6T43HUNTER6about 16 years ago
Amuse Me

This really did amuse me,the only time I had a dose of" Crabs"was when I met up with an old female friend solicitor[maybe she would have been better off soliciting].We had a magic three months together,in fact we laugh about it now.Many happy moments from your stories,keep them coming.Yes she wore lovely stockings,cost me a fortune.

NamizujsNamizujsabout 16 years ago
An excellent story again Egmont

The title has it all!

Where oh where were girls like that some time ago?

Thanks

John

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
bad

whats the point of getting married when shes just gonna sleep around on him with anyone that asks? im sorry, but this is an awful story with a crappy ending.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Thanks

I enjoyed it. liked the pace and plot.

A small point - You do need to be more assiduous in proof reading repeated short groups of words, as if copy-pasted, do throw the reading flow.

Keep it up

Anonymous
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