by Egmont Grigor
I enjoyed it. liked the pace and plot.
A small point - You do need to be more assiduous in proof reading repeated short groups of words, as if copy-pasted, do throw the reading flow.
Keep it up
whats the point of getting married when shes just gonna sleep around on him with anyone that asks? im sorry, but this is an awful story with a crappy ending.
The title has it all!
Where oh where were girls like that some time ago?
Thanks
John
This really did amuse me,the only time I had a dose of" Crabs"was when I met up with an old female friend solicitor[maybe she would have been better off soliciting].We had a magic three months together,in fact we laugh about it now.Many happy moments from your stories,keep them coming.Yes she wore lovely stockings,cost me a fortune.