by mimaster
There are not many stories on this site that after this many chapters, still get more and more exciting...and this story is definitely one of those few! I really like the person Neil is. I liked how he left his Bond character on the side for a bit while he spoke to Tina about her being a beautiful person and how she was much more than she was giving herself credit for. I don't think she was fishing for compliments or anything like that but I think she plays herself to come off as more confident than she really is so it was really sweet of Neil to tell her all of those things :) Now as far as this other couple now!! I really cannot wait to see what happens there!!! Great chapter again, will be on the lookout for the next part! =)
I love this story. It's the best I've read on this website. I check every day for the next chapter. With all the story threads that have been started, it will be 100 chapters long if all the loose ends get tied up. That's ok, I'll read every word. My only advice, write faster.