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sultrluv2sultrluv2almost 4 years ago
Intrigued

Keep writing I’m curious to see how this plays out

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Intriguing start. looking forward to future chapters.

WIlliamLongWIlliamLongalmost 4 years agoAuthor
Chapter 2 is posted.

I need some feedback. Constructive criticism welcome.

CommodorRaptrCommodorRaptrover 2 years ago

Very in depth backstory and an interesting but still cliché main character. I must say that you've got balls, not many authors use under age subjects. Good work.

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