All Comments on 'Anna Submits to Her Husband Ch. 02'

Eine wirklich schöne Geschichte freue mich auf die Fortsetzung

Great chapter, well written. It’s easy to get caught up in the heat of things.

There is a continuity error of sorts though, in ch1 you said that she loved pain, whilst in this chapter you contradicted it. For me the pain pleasure threshold is going beyond a thuddy flogger or OTK spanking and moving onto a cane or whip (shudder).

Tess (uk)

Thanks for the comments! I plan to keep writing

@Tess, I certainly did not mean to make it appear like Anna did not like pain. This was about denying her what she wanted as pain would not be a punishment for her. Could you please point me to what made you think this so I can improve in the next chapter?

Eeep! I must apologise! I’m so sorry, I just re-read this and this time I can’t see anything that points to her not enjoying this aside from the strappado face fucking scene. Even then it’s not a complete negative. Being held strappado and being roughly face fucked would be unnerving. It’s a complete lack of control.

So so sorry! I love your writing style and the attention to detail. The aftercare was perfect.

Tess (uk)