All Comments on 'Another Fire'

Dear readers, thank you for coming by and staying till the end of the text!

Don't hesitate to comment. Any insight will be much appreciated. English is my second language, so I'll happily welcome grammar and syntactical feedback as well.

I hope you enjoyed all the action between Max and the no-name artist ^^

Absolutely fantastic story and hot as hell! Would have been better without the condoms though 😉

I can’t believe English is your second language! Can’t wait for the second paths crossing 😊

Your first story here on Lit and it's your first hit! This was hot, moody and sexy as Hell. And best of all, you ended it with the possibility of a sequel. You get *****s right out of the gate.