All Comments on 'Anything to Come'

This started as incredibly utterly mindblowingly sexy and then all those sexy feel good vibes went like an off switch because of this...

“ ..Good girls didn't let themselves get tied up in a position that let them be fucked, early and often. Good girls didn't wind up with clamps on their nipples and their panties taped deep in their mouths. Good girls didn't get off on being called cunt, or being whipped, or crying and begging to come. My wife, my slave, wasn't a good girl. And for that, I would continue to punish her...”

That just dropped him from White Knight Sexy Dom to just another sick sadistic misogynistic turd. It was like having a bucket of cold water thrown on my libido. Not even the I love you at the end was enough to redeem the story for me. Good catch adding in the safety scissors. For me BDSM is a symbiotic relationship mutually assured pleasure but with the mindfuck of kink and erotic pain thrown in.

For some bizarre reason I tend to think of those who enjoy kink as being open minded and forward thinking than those who are horrified by it. If she’s his 24/7 sub then surely his internal monologue is his actual opinion and not part of his Dom persona? He’s just judged her as a person and as a woman on their SHARED kink. How the fuck does that work out?

Im literally sick of all the bullshit attitude, “good girls don’t do that..”. If a single guy fucks 4 or 5 different women he’s more or less applauded as a fucking hero. If a single woman fucks 4 or 5 different men then she gets judged as a slut, a dirty cunt/ whore etc. It’s completely fucked up. No one sex m/f is better than another. Our society is ridiculous fucked up, anything to do with sex and women are judged for it and men aren’t.

If I’m wrong about his “attitude” then apologies it didn’t come across to me that way and I misread the story.

Best of luck with your writing.

Tess (UK)

Thank you for reading my story and for your comments! I love to hear how readers react to my stories - there's usually not much in the way of comments. I'm sorry the story turned badly for you. To explain his rationale at that point, that's the narrative going on in his mind, it's his beast, his role in the game they are playing. He loves his wife and would take care of her safety, both mentally and physically - that goes without saying, even though he's harsh with her. But it's their dynamic, the element of humiliation that they both feed on. They know each other intimately, being 24/7 husband and wife, know what makes the other tick. He knows what she likes and what he thinks is going through her mind. I was trying to present a deeper, darker take on power exchange, CNC to some degree. I tried to set the tone with the first line of the story, "I'm going to destroy you." The personalities build on the prequel, The Basement - and thank you for reading and commenting on that one too! :) I was walking a fine line with non-consensual there but in the end I felt the dynamic of their relationship was somewhat dark but ultimately what they both want. Thank you again for reading and thank you so much for your comments! ~ Toran