All Comments on 'Aristippus Ch. 01 - A Very Close Call'

Interesting premise, made me wonder if the guy paying her fee is part of the management at the “retreat”?

Thx

Tess (uk)

Nice set-up and interesting concept.

Career earnings/Education costs ratio there is unbeatable.

Hi, Tall78701,

Thanks for recommending this. This looks like a very interesting idea that could potentially have good staying power over the length you noted. The anonymous benefactor was a great idea to keep up the reader’s interest as long as the person’s identity remains a mystery (with little clues being dropped along the way) until at or near the story’s climax. Finally, I liked that this chapter was essentially a prologue and that, though focused on sex, you didn’t feel forced to include a sex scene in it. According to your author’s note at the beginning, there will be plenty of that in later chapters.

SC