All Comments on 'Aristippus Ch. 05 - Wednesday Front'

Good follow up and close out to the abrupt ending of chapter 4; not quite a cliffhanger there but close enough so well done. The chapter presented a creative scenario, and I liked that Lacey worked with Angie (though we never got Angie’s thoughts on that so I suspect it may come up again in coming days). The evening was fun, with good chemistry between them and creative activity. Personally, I think this was the best chapter to date so 5*. I’ll try to send a PM with a couple of writing-related comments.