by K_Finnegan
Your storytelling is captivating, as always. Wasn't as into the end as the rest, but that's to be expected given my orientation. This isn't the type of story I generally go for (I'm a monogamous romance kind of girl) but I loved this anyway. Looking forward to more!
I really enjoy the interaction between the two young ladies, I find the see-saw between gentle and fierce highly erotic.
wft? make it more believable, u dont go the the hospital for breast engorment! just the the fing pump or get her freind to suck her.
I found it very exciting wanting more you have a talent for keeping the reader craving the same experience!