All Comments on 'Art, Part Two Ch. 10'

Jerry in Washington State, USA - I know you have hinted about this possibility before and even listed it as one of the choices in Part One, Chapter 10, but - as I have commented before - I find this chapter about a human dildo sickening. I still gave you a FIVE for the entire story, but I would have given no stars for this chapter. I'm hoping that somehow Art can be returned to a normal human being, even if that is as a smaller person. I know you have three more chapters to fix this but I don't see how. If this is how it ends, I will be very disappointed. You are a good writer and made me care about Art. I'm tempted to give up reading right now, but I'll stick through the next three chapters.

I hope this is just a nightmare Art is having anticipating what these crazy bitches are gonna do with him.

i'm really intersted to see where this story is gonna end up.