by FreshFire
I don't understand, how reading something like this supposed to be fun or enjoyable?
You definitely need some suspension of belief to believe that an adult wrote this. I don't think you know how to describe the same thing in more than one way.
An enjoyable entry to a series that indulges a certain fetish. Heh, and the wheels have turned now. Cindy has left, but Anaa is back. Perhaps they'll occasionally rotate, getting his hopes up and then leaving whenever he's filled their temporary need for love and companionship on a meaningful level, only to get their more primal desires fulfilled.
Hopefully more to this series will come, as there are still many ideas that could occur. But if not, at least it ended on a high note.