All Comments on 'Asking a Friend for a Loan Ch. 03'

All I can say is "uh-oh"...LOL! 5*

Wonder what happens when they return home.

Very hot story! As I guessed, sex with Valerie is so good, why give that up?

Another hot, sexy chapter! Thanks for sharing!

A story from the "Twilight zone" trying to pass as a normal world story! Yes, that bad!

Boy that was good!

This sank awhile ago.

how to fuck up two marriages in the very near future. Luckily, this is fiction.

So how's your plan working out now Mattie? Skip any extended South Seas suck and fuck in the next part and get to the return home; that's where this story will really get interesting. 5 stars for this chapter.

Mattie just lost her husband right there. with-holding from your man what is rightfully his is detrimental to the relationship.

Someone is gonna be a loser in this story. Only drama is who its gonna be.

Really hot story leaving us wondering what happens when the vacation loan is over. Good story. Thanks for the writing?

Ed

Good story line going here. Some options options for the finale. Can’t wait for the last chapter

Dayum!

Would love to see them swap with the young couple.

I am glad that they stayed true to being just the two of them. I would have expected more r longer anal . I'm also glad you continued to talk about the photos and videos that they were to send back. I still see a cuckquean once they get home, hopefully with Mattie servicing Valarie as well. if not can't wait to see what happens when they return to work. thanks for sharing thi. 5 stars so far.

He's better than me. I would have had her bra-less and panty-less the whole vacation.

Really silly.