All Comments on 'Asset Recovery Ch. 02'

Good writing & plot. Chapters are short and brief though. All characters could use more depth. Looking forward to the next one. Thank you for sharing.

Good writing but a quick plot, don't be afraid to build up with foreplay and teasing especially with a submissive nonconsensual theme like this. Next chapter might want to include some bondage to make it more intense.

Good writing but agree it is to short, build up to it. If it's nonconsensual submissive then work in some teasing for anticipation of the entry. Make her scared or nervous of the entry. Some bondage of the girlfriend may be good as she I assume will be described as strong willed and need to be broken down.